Nathalie's Eportfolio 2010
Wednesday, December 8, 2010
Term 3 goal reflection
Best visual language term 4
Quiddage!!!!
Wednesday, December 1, 2010
My time at Riverdale school recount
Recount of athletics day
My heart pounding as I take a very slow step to the start line with a feeling of nervousness. Then suddenly I hear a deep booming voice. It was Mr Bron. I lift my head up and I listen to his words. "Take your marks,get set," toot! That was the hooter.
I take one foot of the start line and I start to sprint as fast as I can. "I'm doing well, I'm doing well," I say to myself. I see Ansley and Kate in front of me, but I still know that Charlotte is still behind me.I hadn't knocked any over yet and I didn't think I was going to knock any over. My heart pounds even harder as I run faster and faster to try and catch up with Kate. By now I am tying with Kate but then she slips ahead of me and that's the race over. I pass the finish line.
"Ohhhh bad luck," I say to myself. I would've made it through to the finals but I had finished in 3rd place. I feel a little rush of anger run up my spine, but then I got over it, now that I had seen other very disappointed people as well as me.
Tuesday, November 2, 2010
My Speech
Speeches
Written and Oral Language
We are learning to:
Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately
Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically
Speech Topic:
| Self Assessment from video | Speech in front of class | |
Success Criteria: | |||
Speech Writing | |||
My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced | | | |
The point I was making was easy to understand | | | |
My speech contained research | | | |
My speech had voice and was interesting | | | |
My speech was in my words | | | |
My big idea comes through strongly | | | |
Presentation | |||
I enunciated my words clearly | | | |
Terminal consonants | | ||
Ts and ds in the middles of words | | ||
Swallowed my goobies first | | ||
Seperated my words | | ||
My voice was loud enough | | | |
I learnt my speech off by heart | | | |
I used expression in my voice | | | |
I used enough volume to be heard by all | | | |
I used eye-contact | | | |
My speech was not too fast, not too slow | | | |
My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes | | | |
My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words | | | |
Total: | | |
Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14
Self Assessment after Video
17 / 19
Self Assessment after Speech
15 / 19