W.A.L.T make tired writing come to life

It was the night of Halloween.The sound of black bats and vampires made Emily's legs turn to jelly as she fell to the hard concrete footpath. Emily got up and she tiptoed fearfully and slowly into the dusky dark spooky haunted house that was standing right beside her.It's roof was all ripped and fallen apart it looked like it had red bloodshot eyes.Shivers came trembling down Emily's boney spine as she slowly crept closer and closer inside the house. Emily reached into her brand new purple Kathmandu rucksack for her girly pink torch but suddenly................. she felt ghostly fingers creeping up her arm which made her freeze to a sudden stop.


Self assessment:
What did I do well? I did well by making my writing interesting and making it come to life.
What did I learn? I learnt that if you add lots of adjectives.verbs,nouns etc etc then it makes your writing very interesting .
What could I do better next time? Next time I could make my writing a bit longer to make my writing even better.

Maths Fraction strategie

Self assessment:
What did I do well? I did well by explaining the strategie.
What did I learn? i learnt that it is important to speak clearley in the videos.
What could I do better next time? Next time I could talk clearer in the video.

Maths Fraction strategie

Self assessment:
What did I do well? I did well by explaining the strategie.
What did I learn? i learnt that it is important to speak clearley in the videos.
What could I do better next time? Next time I could talk clearer in the video.

Maths Fraction strategie

Self assessment:
What did I do well? I did well by explaining the strategie.
What did I learn? i learnt that it is important to speak clearley in the videos.
What could I do better next time? Next time I could talk clearer in the video.

My best visual language - Term 3

What did I do well? I did well by relating my pictures to the poem.
What did I learn? I learnt that I shouldn't color the backround in grey because it makes the piece of work dull.
What could I do better next time? Next time I could maybe link my letters to make my writing neater.

Peters spelling test

I think I have improved in my spelling this year and I am proud of my result and spelling age.