Tuesday, July 27, 2010
Wednesday, July 21, 2010
My Term2 homefun%
Tuesday, July 20, 2010
My PI matrix term 2
PI Matrix
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Reads the words on the PowerPoint or GlogClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
My term 2 goal achievments
This term I think I have achieved my goal because I was never scared to try things and I also gave everything a go.Next time I should not be so scared to put my name up on the board to have a basic facts ladder test.
Tuesday, June 22, 2010
My writing moderation
My Dad
My Dad has chocolate brown hair, and ocean blue eyes. He makes all the money in the house. He always wears long pants and a short sleeve T- shirt. He wears glasses that are oval shaped turned sideways. He has peach coloured skin and has a little mole on the side of his left cheek. He bikes to work every day even if it’s pouring down with rain or absolutely windy. My dad has a big shed in the back of our garden all to himself. One thing that my dad loves to do is buy lots of technical bits and pieces and make things in his shed like building speaker stands so he can stand his speakers on them and making tree huts for us except the huts are on the ground instead of up a tree. One thing that does get on my nerves is when dad turns on his music really hard out that it tunes the whole neighbourhood. That is really annoying. But the good thing about my dad is his beautiful scones they’re the best in the whole world, he probably adds a special ingredient that makes them taste so good. My dad is special to me because he gives me warm hugs.
By Nathalie LC13
Year 6
My self assessment: I think I did well by putting in the right puntuation, and great descriptive words.

